Sunday, November 7, 2010

Wonderful Writing

We have been writing some creative stories over the last week or two. We have been looking at and creating adventure pictures using a programme called Kidpix and then we have written about them. We have even recorded our voices reading the stories onto the pictures in a slideshow but Mrs O'Donnell has to figure out how we can put that on our blog.

Here are a few of our stories for you to read.
    
 The lightening is going to change the dragon into a frog. By Steven

The dragon is grabbing the treasure. By Koby

The ballerina is going to get her treasure. The dragon is going to help her get over the bridge. By Briah


Jungle Jim is going to get the poisonous snake with his rope. By Josiah

Jungle Jim is going to get eaten by the snake. He is going to climb up the tree- the biggest tree. By Destiny
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1 comment:

Mrs Bennington said...

Lovely creative writing Room 3. I especially like the word 'grabbing' Koby. It makes me think it might be a sneaky, greedy dragon. But then Destiny's story makes me think the dragon might be kind and helpful. Story writing is so much fun. You can write your story just the way you want to.
A big :) from Mrs B.

November 10, 2010 at 3:38 PM

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